نقد احمد الموسوي

By Ahmed Almosawi
Dear Abdullah Saadi,

Warm greetings,
I have read your story “The Eraser and the Pencil” with great attention, and I would like to express my deep admiration for the profound symbolism it carries, despite its apparent simplicity.
The dialogue between the eraser and the pencil skillfully reflects the contradictions we experience in our daily lives, where our roles and responsibilities often clash with each other. The pencil, representing creativity and beginnings, and the eraser, representing correction and sacrifice, engage in a philosophical conversation that captures the essence of human nature and our stance on mistakes and correctness.
The story reminds us that each of us has a unique role in this world, and no role is less important than the other. A pencil without an eraser might remain trapped in errors, and an eraser without a pencil might remain purposeless. It is the balance between writing and erasing mistakes that makes life richer and more meaningful.
I was particularly moved by the moral you derived from the story, which reminds us that our lives shrink day by day, and if we cannot be a source of happiness for others, we can at least be a source of comfort and hope for them. Sacrifice for the sake of others is the highest form of humanity, and it is what gives our existence value.
I would like to add that the wisdom we draw from this story should guide us in every step we take. We must learn how to be pens that write the happiness of others and erasers that erase their sorrows. Through this balance, we achieve true happiness and contribute to building a better future.
Thank you for this inspiring story, and I wish you continued success and prosperity in your literary journey.
With best regards,
Ahmed Al-Mosawi
عبد الله سعدي